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lets change our way of living less tv less internet now that's freedom!!jesus loves you!
johnnyleveque Posted: Mon Aug 22 09:05:57 2005 Post | Quote in Reply  
  A greedy world
The world had begun
No one knows if we were more than just one
No evil to pollute our minds
But know in these times
The world is controlled
The rich feed off the poor
And police patrol
Certain countries colonise for more
Making people feel fear
Intelligent lear
For those who are dumb
Like those who start wars for fun&mun
Worshiping money as god
Eating OGM corn on the cob
Technology's good?
For massacring the rain-forest wood
Nothing is lost
Nothing is created
Everything is transformed
The world is transforming-think of others
Johnny Leveque Copyright 2005

Brazilian Yet Human
To whom right,To whom wrong
A young man running
Whose life just began
Police follow him all along
Slam him down on the pavement ground
No questions asked
It's a shoot to kill
One first shot giving eternal silence
The other ones expressing pure violence
For him this day all blacked out
Taking the place of god mankind will bring sudden death
Do unto others as you would have them do unto you
Unlucky to have not been born white
Dead now inspite
Anti-terrorist's can't bring him back now
From dust he came from dust he shall return
Only not by gods hands!
Johnny LevequeCopyright 2005

Johnny Leveque

Mesh Posted: Mon Aug 22 09:28:20 2005 Post | Quote in Reply  
  That second about the man in London?

DaveHill Posted: Mon Aug 22 10:35:35 2005 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, and personally, i think it becomes so much better if people try to write with that thought in mind. Especially your first piece would benefit greatly. It all seems a bit too, euhm, artifical now.
But that's my modest opinion, no offence meant. And yes, i'd say it's about that nasty event in London.

DaveHill Posted: Mon Aug 22 10:36:46 2005 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Oh, and one Trogdor preaching to us was quite enough for a while :)


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