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ehwazingwaz Posted: Tue Nov 24 11:37:17 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  <wrote this a long time ago, this is the edited version, please tell me your thoughts.>

I only love you
Because she loves you

I only miss you
because she does too

I only need you
because you're so far away
(from her)

I only care
because she cares for you

I only want to have you
because you are here

I only move on
for my own sake

I only say goodbye
because she longs to say hello

I only wish you happiness
because with you she's happy

I only miss you
because she does too

I only miss you
because I'm not with you

I only miss you
I'll always love you
But you'll never know

I only need you
because you're so far away
(from my heart)

I only give up
because you have too

I only love
because my heart still beats

I only love
unconditionally




 
Puck Posted: Tue Nov 24 17:49:47 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  dig


 
Kira Posted: Tue Nov 24 23:26:02 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  That's lovely, Waz. And so sad, but for those final two lines, which seem to make all that anguish somehow... clean.


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Thu Nov 26 12:16:44 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Kira said:
>That's lovely, Waz. And so sad, but for those final two lines, which seem to make all that anguish somehow... clean.


thank you. i hadn't previously recognized those last two lines as being cleansing. *re-evaluates* :-D


 
mat_j Posted: Thu Dec 3 08:35:49 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Again I am imrpessed, and i'm not often impressed.

It sounds like something my mind would start doing behind my back.


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Thu Dec 3 18:46:36 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  mat_j said:
>Again I am imrpessed, and i'm not often impressed.
>
>It sounds like something my mind would start doing behind my back.

:-D and i don't even consider this one to be incredibly strong...


 
Puck Posted: Thu Dec 3 20:22:26 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I guess the strong ones are like a knee in the gut, huh?


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Fri Dec 4 03:11:31 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Puck said:
>I guess the strong ones are like a knee in the gut, huh?

i sure hope so. i try to make them that way. :-) i should post something a little bolder, yes?


 



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